Question by Amanda M: Is there anything wrong with my Resume?
I’m not getting any responses to the Emails I have been sending for jobs through Craigslist. I know the market is BAD but I just want to make sure that my resume is okay, and its not turning off employers.

Here is the Email I send to potential jobs.

Hello,

I am responding to the ad on Craigslist. I feel my experience makes me a qualified candidate for this position, and I would love an opportunity to interview. I am a very reliable worker, and I have alot of drive to succeed. I am determined to find a position that I can keep long term, and I feel I would be a great asset to your company. My salary requirements are $ 15 an hour, but are negotiable depending on the position. I look forward to your call, and thank you for reviewing my response. I have pasted a resume below for your review.

Best Regards,

Amanda M****

Amanda M*****

123456 W. Cerritos Ave |Anaheim, Ca | (714)

Objective

Seeking an office position in a growing, fast paced and friendly environment. I would like to utilize my strong organizational and time management skills. I enjoy either working in a small office where I have the opportunity to learn most if not all aspects of that business. Or in a large office where I have the opportunity to show my skills and dedication, and prove that I am a great candidate for advancement. I pride myself in taking great knowledge in my job, and I learn as much as I can about the business I am working for, so that I am a valuable asset.

Skills Profile

- Microsoft Office, including Word, Excel, PowerPoint, and Outlook.

- QuickBooks.

- Knowledge of Internet.

- Ability to handle multiple tasks.

- Ordering office supplies.

- Accounts Payable, Accounts Receivable, Billing, Invoicing, Payroll, Collections Petty Cash.

- Knowledgeable in office procedures and office machines.

Employment History

Bartender

10/2008 – 09/2008 Malone’s Bar & Grill Santa Ana, Ca

Starting Pay: $ 8.50 Ending Pay: $ 8.50

- Serve drinks and food to all patrons.

- Manage cash register accurately.

- Provide excellent customer service, and maintain all aspects of the bar from cleaning and stocking to answering the phone and booking bands and entertainment.

Office Manager

06/2008 – 10/2008 Hired Gun Exterminating Garden Grove, Ca

Starting Pay: $ 15.00 Ending Pay: $ 15.00

- Sit in Office Manager while permanent Manager was on medical leave.

- Answer phones, and schedule and dispatch all pest control jobs.

- Enter all termite reports and mail reports to customers.

- Receive and enter payments for jobs and yearly control policies. Bill customers for yearly controls and occasionally for termite jobs.

Office Manager

01/2006 – 03/2008 Super Dave’s Print & Mail Santa Ana, Ca

Starting Pay: $ 13.00 Ending Pay: $ 16.00

- Input all A/P and A/R, and pay all invoices in a timely manner.

- Payroll for 10 employees through ADP.

- Maintained account with Health, Life, and 401k companies.

- Schedule and dispatch drivers and make sure route is most time efficient.

- Sent statements once a month to customers.

- Schedule tasks and meetings for all office employees.

- Answered 4-line phone, maintained high standard of customer service when speaking to all customers, including remembering customer’s names and order history.

- Kept close track of job scheduling, ensuring that no jobs were forgotten, and completed as scheduled and on time.

- Use QuickBooks for accounting and PRINTLeader software for all job management.

- General office duties included: Bank deposits, ordering office supplies, handle customer transactions, took credit card payments, manage reception desk, and all other general office duties.

Administrative Assistant

02/2005 – 01/2006 HCS Cutler, Inc. Rancho Cucamonga , Ca

Starting Pay: $ 11.50 Ending Pay: $ 13.50

- Managed and logged cash reports printed from registers at 8 different locations.

- Managed all bank deposits ensuring timeliness and accuracy as well as reconcile monthly statements.

- Investigated and resolved and credit card disputes that were filed..

- Managed a fleet of 60 vehicles, including class A, B, and C trucks.

- Completed any necessary paperwork for CA DMV.

- Handled all car insurance needs, including: Filing auto accident claims, filling out accident reports, adding and deleting drivers and vehicles to the policy, and following through with adjusters to make sure claims were handled properly.

Office Manager

10/2002 – 02/2005 Telcom Services Riverside , Ca

Starting Pay: $ 7.00 Ending Pay: $ 9.00

- Maintained data logs

Best answer:

Answer by They Call Me Nardo
i would leave off the bartender part, unless you are looking for another bartending job. it is irrelevant to the rest of your resume.

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